IDUNN.
A downloadable game for Windows, macOS, Linux, and Android
Story
That time of year has arrived again, the season of warmth and fun. It's the perfect time for a vacation on one of the country's luxurious islands!
Finn and his sister, along with their friends, are about to embark on an amazing trip. They'll explore new places and play various games together.
Along the way, they'll also meet new people who will make their journey even more exciting!
So, join them on this adventure, But just remember, don’t stay too close to the shore at night!
Characters
Finn Fox Age: 22
Finn is a young man who lives with his sister. Although his appearance may seem calm and simple, he is actually intelligent and clever.
Mert German Shepherd Age: 37 
Mert is one of the island’s residents, a warm and friendly man who easily attracts people. He is a reliable and trustworthy person.
Artyom Dobermann Age: 35
Artyom is a tourist, just like you, but he knows the island better than you do. He is a serious and calm person, which makes it difficult to get close to him.
Riley Fox Age: 25
Riley is Finn's kind and caring sister. Although she can sometimes be a bit overprotective and strict, Finn still loves her.
Zuri Hyena Age: 23
Zuri is one of Riley's childhood friends, which is why she also becomes closer to Finn. She is energetic and lively, making her an important friend to Finn and the others.
Sumin Labrador Age: 22
Sumin is also one of Finn's childhood friends, and they even went to the same school. She is cute and kind, always caring about others.
Warning
This game is intended for adults only (18+) and contains explicit sexual content, including depictions of homosexual relationships between men.
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i cant wait for another ubdate <3
will there be like group sex scene? i rly want to romance all of them at the same time...
i havent played throughout the whole game
Sure! But you’ll have to wait a little bit...
i love u so much for this. <3
Are there any plans for Jiro (Will he be romanceable in the future?), I think developing a relationship with him will be very interesting, making him change the way he sees you step by step..., omg 😱 I love him, he have so much potential 💕.
As always amazing update, loving your work, even the mini games where entertaining. Wishing you the best of luck with this project
Artyom really is a jerk in this entire VN....
i mean he is trying his best to change, u might need to give him a chance to talk about his past to understand him a little more, just know that he rly is trying
Man, I don't believe it! I just ate all content in some days... I was so into the story and loved all characters! Polar, you sure are a great writer! I love your novel and I'd love to see new updates! Congratulations!
Thanks for playing!
Do we get to see more Artyom in the future updates.? I would like to see him bottom more tbh 👀👀
Most of the time, you can choose whether he bottom or top!
The new Update was amazing!~ I am so glad it was updated again this vn was really adorable and very horni~ with surrounded by buff men? I say pls let me just do whatever you want with me Studs~ Although i am curious what other routes will be available and if we can date the shark and unexpectedly the white dogo
In the next update, Holger will return..and there are lots of plans for him!
Hey Polar, you should make a patreon account for those like me who want to support you financially. You totally deserve it! Sharing such an amazing game for free.
Hi! Thank you for the compliment!! I’m planning to open one once I reach 10,000 downloads, hopefully I’ll hit that goal with the next update!!!
I'm sure it will!
wow! this update was the best so far! so much content and a lot of hot stuff... love the new dog too! and the crazy daddy! You're game is turning to be my favorite. All characters have so much personality.
Love the new update and the new additions for the game. Though I have a question, will there be a possible threesome or throuple path between Finn, Mert, and Artyom? That would be awesome since Finn did imply he loved both of them. Also this Rhajiv guy is a bit of a creep but would love to have more content with him (He's hot ngl). Maybe less of a creep then turned into a sweet, caring guy. Keep up the good work and would love to see more of your creations in the future.
Starting from the next update, the poly route begins! And it’s not just between Finn and the dogs, some things also happen between these two too...
I'm not really sure if I should leave a comment on the new update or not? Cause I believe in you and whatever way you'll push this vn in, and would love to say more! Just unfortunately, I can't help but say I hated this update. There were parts I liked/found cute, it just got swallowed up by the rest that kinda felt like a punch to the face that left me in confusion and honestly kinda upset.
The new art and sprites I really liked and love looking at them!
The main parts I really liked were the very start, and the very end. With the start, I thought it was cute and sweet to see Finn be the Otaku he is, and the others entertain him with it, even though being bored. With the end, I loved learning more about the worlds lore, and excited to see more of it!
While I love the idea of them exploring places explicitly gay, I'm iffy with this execution. Personally didn't care that it seemed to be a fetish bar, but I couldn't really enjoy the scene with how the love interests seemed really uncomfortable starting on. While yes they seemed to get into it, I could never escape the vibe. While I am being negative, I will admit I really loved being able to leash the two.
And now for the part I really hated. While yes this was full of Otaku love, pulling references and tropes from them(loved the Madoka one). I loved the background they were very beautiful, and added to the scene! They seems cozy and sweet, and I'd like to have seen the a bit! It's just the characters that bothered me.
When it comes to the new characters, the only one of the three I liked was Wei, and I doubt we'll see him again, I hope he fixes his relationship with Tai, and they get a happy ending! Now the other three, I am mixed on how I feel about things, except Jiro fuck him.Rene I honestly didn't care too much, the only noteworthy things, to me, was him pushing Finn's boundaries and immediately trying to throw him to someone who is very clearly a rapist. The white dog, I forgot his name, and really disgusted with his actions. I will admit, I'm very curious about him since he will be very important to the plot at one point or another! Like his design, so can't see what he throws in.
Now my own segment for Jiro and his wife. I'll be honest, I kinda question why he has a wife, cause you could edit her out and nothing would seemingly change. Now on Jiro... I HATE THAT FUCKING BASTARD!!! I had a lot of hope to see someone so important to Mert, who could help explain why Mert is the man he is today... only to turn out to be the anime perverted old man to the worst degree. I mean, what was the point of making him like that??? It felt like the main joke was " Ahah! He wants to rape the love interests!", and it disgusted me. When I got to his part, I had to drop it for a few hours with how disgusted I was with him in general. While don't get me wrong, you're free to write whatever, but I just can't see the point to this characteristic. It'd been different if it was a moment for Finn to step up and try to protect both of them, or to show that whatever going on with Apple is in fact making changes that he should be? While I mentioned the rapist thing a few times, I can't help but hate him for how he treats his staff, especially Wei. He decides he must change everything to taste the LI food, and places Wei's job on the line! I cheered so loud for him when he quit.
Now with the LI, I was excited to see more cute moments, but instead I was worried for their sake cause of what happened in this update. It was just pure discomfort that was really hard to read, and I was tempted on skipping parts of it cause of the horrid taste it left me with. Cause even in the bar, they showed they weren't interested in anyone else there, just thankfully they were more respectful then some certain old men that should be executed via boiling oil. And honestly, I couldn't help be upset with them with the food contest. I understand they want to impress Finn in hopes of romancing him, but I was concerned with how willing they were to get a guy fired for this contest. I am always excited to see a poly route as an option, I love them, just seems kinda strange it still goes poly if you've only focused on only one of them.
While I will admit I may have gone overboard with this review, I've just been loving this story and these characters and I wanna see more! I'm hoping I didn't go too far and be discouraging, I have faith in you and this vn, and I only wish the best. Also, I'm exhausted cause I haven't slept just yet after binging this vn. I don't believe this chapter reflects the vn or who you are as a person, just kinda confusing honestly. I wish you luck and hope for the future of you and your vn!
And looking back on the review, I very well went on for way too long, my bad!
Hey! No worries at all, I’m actually really happy you took the time to write such a thoughtful and long comment! Jiro Trope was meant to be like a pervy old anime man, so that’s why he acted that way, but calling him a rapist feels like a bit of an exaggeration. He was more of a comic relief and didn’t actually intend to do anything truly harmful. As for Tome, she took care of Mert when he was a kid and is a really important part of his backstory. And in the bar scene, Mert was just a little embarrassed, it’s not like he disliked it. He definitely enjoyed being there too.
Either way, I’m really sorry if it made you feel uncomfortable, maybe I didn’t manage to portray everything as clearly as I intended. There won’t be anything like that in the upcoming updates, so I hope you’ll still be interested in continuing the story!
I do plan on enjoying more, and excited for what comes up next! I will admit, some of the stuff I mentioned were more personal things, but I still stand by what I said for Jiro. If you intended for him to be silly and not actually a rapist, you might need to work on it.
Where I'm coming from, is that the two love interests who are shown again and again capable of taking care of themselves, are absolutely terrified of this man, to the point they're actively trying to escape him every chance they get. And he makes it very clear of what he wants, and starts chasing them to the point of the two having to hide from him. Absolutely nothing about Jiro suggest or comes off as him not being serious. Now if it were like he'd say a creepy thing, and got a smack for it, that'd show it more humorous. But no, it's just reactions of horror, and Rene and Finn have to call him out on it.
I will admit I have an extreme heavy bias against this trope, but it seems a little more extreme version
If that's the case, in the next update, I plan to rewrite that part a bit. After the incident with rajiv, Finn goes to help and convinces Jiro. Then Jiro will apologize and show a bit more of his better side. Do you think that sounds good?
It seems good to me, him apologizing and explaining the reason would make it clearer why he did what he did, by the way I have a question why in the two NSFW scenes Fin looks tiny next to their members, or is it just a matter of perspective?
That definitely sounds like a plan!
Whaaaat? Jiro is the man!
First of all, thank you for your hard work. We appreciate every effort you put into the VN. With that, I would like to give my honest review of the current update. These opinions are personal takes, feel free to add or criticize my opinions. Spoiler warning, of course.
1. I like how you make the gals less annoying on day 3 and day 4. especially Riley with her recent background reveal. She is more tolerant towards Finn now on day 4 and so does her friends. it feels like Finn has 3 sisters instead of 1. That alone is Sweet enough to start day 4.
2. I love the fact that you add "that one gay best friend" with every GAY stereotype imaginable. I was so excited to see another TWINK join the gang. At this point, Rene is my fav char on day 4, just cause of the humor he brought me.
3. Day 4's story is kind of all over the place. So much is going on since the end of day 3. From the wedding to shooting to Max's situation ends with Riley's apology. On to day 4 TWINK reveal to MEGUKA!🗣️🔥 Then gay bar EPIC BAND BATTLE onto meeting prevy oldman right after that we had FOOD BATTLE followed by SEGGS, and not long after we get creepy stalker. Honestly, the whole day 4 feels like a fever dream. I'm not saying that day 4 is bad. The fact that it has the most comedy than any other day is quite refreshing and enjoyable. Although as a reader I couldn't help to feel confused... "WHAT'S GOING ON??!!"
4. I appreciate that you gave Artyom's character more thought. Adding more to his background bit by bit, and the rewrite on the day 2 necklace scene is sweet and romantic. It is now comparable to Mert's flower scene. Not only that day 2 rewrite is giving Artyom "More than the cover" vibes rather than the rude person he once before. Also, for the first time, Arty doesn't invalidate his advance at the end of the day. I'm quite satisfied with how it turns out.
5. As a reader, I feel like these two lines came out as rude and a bit harsh. But considering Arty's personality, it is understandable.
It feels like I'm being told, "No, you're not replacing him ever." "But I love you now and you're still alive, that is." A bit dramatic reaction from me. I suggest changing them into something like " Of course not, He is my first love and no one is going to replace that." "But you, Finn. You remind me how it feels to like someone. To love someone again." Or add another line to Artyom's existing dialog, such as "And why would I need you to replace him? You are not his replacement, Finn. You have your own place in my heart." or something like that.
I'm happy with the changes and how the VN progresses. It has improved a lot since its release. I love the fact that you are willing to listen to the community and improve from their critiques. And I hope this vn will be greater as time goes on. Congratulations on 6K downloads!
Hi! I’m glad you liked the new characters, and also really happy I managed to rewrite Day 2 better, I was honestly worried I might’ve messed it up again, haha. About what you mentioned, I think you’re right , that part was meant to be a bit more serious, which is why Artyom talks that way. But he really does love Finn.
aww when will the update come out?
I finally unlock all gallery. This game is amazing and mind if I ask one question.
I really Like Holger that shark guy, and maybe he has his own route and his gallery scene with fin and Holger dating. Probably In the next update. Thank you so much for this game
Im so excited to see what comes next of this story.👍
How do i unlock all gallery. I only have one missing since I finished the game.
If you got Mert’s route, you need to start over and choose Artyom every time, or vice versa.
Okay thank you so much ❤️
I was scrolling through the comments and saw that you said that all the characters are dateable. So does that mean I can date that big shark and the equines? I haven't played the game yet
Yes!
Tysm for the response S2
What were the inspiration(s) to IDUNN?
Mostly an original idea, but I took inspiration from the visual novel Little Busters and Kaguya-sama anime for humor and fun parts of the game.
Nice!
A little detail you can input is Finn showing a bit of irritation when Riley is annoying him early in the story before the talk in the update.
This can show Finn showing emotions instead of being more of an observer
I think I can do something about it. I’ll take a look at it... thanks! (:
No problem! Keep up the good work!
Will they become a throuple???
Maybe...
WHAT?!?
SERIOUSLY?!?
Spoiler from future updates: Yes, you can... I mean, you will... :)
OMGGG!?!?!
When's next update?
You can follow me on BlueSky, I post progress updates for the new update every 3 days there.
I enjoyed playing the game. The minigames, character designs ( different outfits everyday and that customisable part ), how the old farts teared a bit when they confess their love etc. Though I thought it'd be more of a normal dating sim like Tennis Ace rather than fantasical like Adastra or smth. Enjoyed it nonetheless :3
Also my country mentioned 🇸🇬🇸🇬🇸🇬, didn't know we manufactured high-end sports shoes X3
I love your country! This is just a different timeline, so you might see some fictional elements in it :)
Hi @Polar Cake. I know you are only active on Bluesky and not looking to open other accounts. BUT I want to draw your attention to Discord. There is a server there called "Furry Paradise & Visual Novels" where you can apply for your own separate channel for IDUNN if you don't want to run a server yourself. Maybe something to think about?
Hi! I'm already a member of that Discord, but I'm not sure if my game is popular enough for them to create a separate section for it.
That is what they are there for though. And your game is plenty popular. Just contact Cody White and ask?
*edit* I told him you may contact him. Cos, why not, right?
Thanks! I'll ask them about it.
I really love the puzzles and mini games!!!!!!!!!!
Pls make Holger dateable
In fact, make ALL of them dateable! Or play-with-able
An excellent start, having multiple hot mature musclemen lust after the MC is an incredibly effective way to pull us into the narrative. Bravo!
Is there a straight playthrough of this game, or at least play as a female?
While it's possible to romance Zuri and Sumin, they are not the main focus of the game.
So Finn is bisexual?
Sexual fluid, He is currently gay, but if you choose the girls, he becomes bisexual.
Gotcha
Are artyom and mert the only options or are there more and or will there more be added?
(I havent played fully but the other characters like holgar and the others i see here on itch seem also very dateble, so i just kinda hope for big viarity haha)
Yes, almost all characters are romanceable, but only Mert and Artyom have routes, while the others just have a special ending.
This sounds really exciting! I love that almost all characters are romanceable, but I was wondering if each of them will also have CGs(SFW and NSFW) – not just at the end, but throughout the story as well. It would be great if they were more involved in minigames, so we could interact with them even more. The dress-up minigame is especially fun – are there any plans to include it more often? I’d also love to see the side characters more integrated into the story, maybe with their own small events or minigames. Do you have anything like that planed?
(This is voice generated, i hope this sounds alright xd)
Female characters won’t have any NSFW scenes, but the other characters will. Dress up mini game will return in one of the updates with more outfits and choices, including for Mert and Artyom. In future updates, side characters will remain the same, but once the full game is released, there will be a special update featuring a longer section for exploring and getting to know the side characters. Thanks for playing the game!
Thank you, one little question again (sorry xd) .the dress up minigame for more characters or only mert and artyom?
Thank you tho for developing this awsome game. Youre work really made my day. Im very excited about future updates! Is there any other social media to suport or follow you?
Only Finn and them. This mini-game isn’t very easy to make because it requires creating a lot of outfits.
I’m only active on BlueSky and don’t plan to open an account anywhere else for now.
I really do enjoy Mert's route. He portrays a mature caring and dotting man quite well. His route is romantic and light hearted which makes it more enjoyable. all that in mind. I'd like to give some criticism. The following points are from my own thoughts and opinions:
1. One route feels more cannon/dominant than the other. It feels like Mert is the "supposed" love interest for Finn. Mert got more screen time than Artyom and that added more depth to his character than Artyom would ever be in his own route.
2. Artyom feels like just an obstacle for the main love interest. As I said in point one, the lack of depth in Artyom's characterization is making me feel like he is a side character who only exists to compete with Mert instead of a genuine second love interest for Finn. He also left with a rude, kind of immature, and competitive man in the introduction part of the story without any reasoning behind his character.
3. The main character favors one more than the others which is kind of bad if you want to make the mc as representative of the reader. Finn's inner thoughts favor Mert more than Artyom. Especially on the first and second days of the story. slightly less in 3rd day which is a good improvement. Finn would always think about Mert at any given time. It is kind of justified considering that Mert did save his life. Although Holger did the same too.Take a look on the second day of the story for example. Artyom tries to appeal Finn's affection by giving him a necklace that he likes while he takes the necklace that Finn likes which is romantic in a sense. Finn's reaction is dull compared to when Mert gave him a bouquet at the end of the day.
4. Artyom romance advancement always got invalidated. On day one he broke it with his rude behaviour. on day two he got shadowed by Mert and on day three he decided to take two steps behind after moving one step forward. This back and forth pattern is not a bad thing. It is actually a great thing if used correctly. It will bring some struggles and slowburns vibes into his story which would give him the depth he needs. although do not overuse it because readers can get tired of the same pattern repeating over and over.
that being said. I really enjoy this VN and I hope that it will be successful in the future.
Thanks for your detailed and thoughtful comment! I’m somewhat aware of this issue myself. Mert has a warm and friendly personality, so it’s very easy for the main character to be drawn to him. But Artyom is cold and harsh, which makes it much harder for me to create moments where the protagonist can connect with him. That’s why I sometimes include emotional scenes for Artyom, so the reader can get closer to him and see a bit of his hidden personality.
You’re right, I might need to rewrite the necklace scene because it didn’t turn out as well as I wanted. I’ll fix it in the next update.
How to get the last cg? Help please🙏
If you got Mert CG then the other will be Artyom version of it. Start New Game and select Artyom choices to lead to this.
Thanks❤️
What ice cream the girls like
For Zuri: first row, third.
For Sumin: second row, first.
For Riley: last row, middle.
Thanks for reminding me… Honestly, I don’t know why I made it so complicated. In the next update, I should make it easier and more understandable.
How can I unlock the third CG?
Get more points for Mert.
I will admit, I thought it might've gone faster then I expected, but I have some suspicion that there might be something with Apple involved. Overall, I really like everything so far, and those new cgs are so delightful!!! Can't wait to see how things go!
Good job for making a really good game, just because the protag is smaller than the rest of character i hope he's not gonna bottom. at least switch :D
But again your game your choice, this pace is build up nicely
I'm hoping the same, have some hope from how willing both were willing too flash their assholes if you wear the skimpy underwear. Also, cause I think it'd be funny if they find out he's just a grower, and just huge. But whatever position they'll have, it'll be super hot!
Finn: Versatile
Mert: Total Top
Artyom : Vers Top
Roland and David: Bottom
ÉQUIPE DES FRÈRE D'OR A FRENCH PHRASE ARE YOU FRENCH?
This is just my 2 cents, but I recommend trying to recruit beta readers for the story to get feedback. The initial build had a great story to start with, but it's taking some turns with the second build which I'm not crazy about.
Hi, what are you not satisfied with? Just say whatever is on your mind, I’m ready to hear it!
*spoiler* For me there was a bit too much 'trying to buy protagonist's affection' with this update. The whole emphasis on spending a huge amount of money on the protagonist when they still barely knew each other rubbed me the wrong way. And the 'chosen one' dialogue took a drastic change in tone versus before. Before the protagonist nearly dies because of a strange entity. And there is an air of mystery as he tries to figure out whose contacting him. Now they are having conversations about him being the 'chosen one' is a totally different light, more comedy and slap stick funny. The change in tone with the alien felt way too fast. These are only my thoughts though. Getting feedback on the story from a couple of others might note something different.
Spoiler
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Mert and Artyom are rivals, and they try to outspend each other for Finn, that’s the reason behind it.
As for the secrets, I should mention that I still want to keep the game’s vibe fun and comedic for now. I also didn’t want the reader to think they were about to play a horror game because it's not horror. But the story is serious and will gradually become more mysterious and deeper. So, I hope you’ll look forward to future updates because this is just the beginning!
I agree with the problems mentioned here. Even though i'm really enjoying the story so far, i can't tell what this story is about, is it a paranormal mystery, a disney/TLC love-comedy, i'm not sure. The twists and turns make it very entertaining and unpredictable both in a good and bad way.
The good way is that it makes the story very different from everything else i've read so far and i love the characters, and how well written it is. It's slowly becoming one of my favorite visuals ever.
The bad way is that at the rate you are going, the story will became a jumble mess of pointless plotlines, plotholes, and chaotic mess of stuff just randomly happening for no reason, like the Mert vs Artyom goalkeeper match (it was very funny but all the Inazuma Eleven special attacks came out of nowhere).
I think you should try to think about what story your are trying to tell, what are the general goals (beginning, middle and end), and focus on building up the characters and story plotpoints from there. Using Adastra as an example, it's a story about a human that was kidnapped by a wolf and as to help him with a political dispute in his home moon in order to return to earth. With that general idea, now you can decide who are the antagonists, what are they doing to prevent the human from returning to earth, who's helping, etc. and then try to imagine how you get from one point to another in a way that makes sense.
TLDR: The characters and overall story is really good, the writing is amazing and the general idea in the first two builds was very compelling, but this last build despite being entertaining, is all over the place in plot size and direction; needs fixing before it becomes a problem. Make clear what's going on in the plot and let it progress slowly in order to flash out the story and character dynamics better, i have no problem with the romance but the whole chosen one and Finn's personality swinging left and right (by that i mean his materialism and how he goes from defending his sister and her friends, to not minding Artyom insulting them, even if he's mad at her) it's not that great, you need to make Finn's personality consistent. My advice is to revise the story so far, and remove the unnecessary.
That's about it, love the your story so far even with the yet small problems and hope to see more from this, don't give up and keep trucking. Good Luck
Small edit: maybe create an email account or space for suggestions, they might help. I have some ideias for small changes you can make, but don't really wanna write it here.
Everything that happens in the game has a reason. Even every sentence that is spoken has been placed with a purpose. I'm just showing the pieces of the puzzle one by one, and at some point, there will be enough pieces to understand the story.
The game's goal is to create an exciting and fun journey. That's why the tone of the story might change at times so that I can continue developing the narrative alongside it. This fun itself is a part of the story, and I can't tone it down...
Finn was angry that day because Riley had gone without him, and Riley expected him to come and apologize. That's why this time, he was already frustrated and let Artyom insult her. But later in the game, we see that he still loves his sister, and they make up. Though Finn might change along with my mood, I'll try to keep his character the same.
I am still in the middle of the game, but I do not like Finn... He seems to be materialist and shallow... but it is part of the story I guess
I wanted the main character to be somewhat blank so the player could project themselves onto them. Actually, this is a general issue in all games, but I'm trying to make Finn more interesting.
But what do you mean by him being materialistic? What exactly makes you think that? I’d appreciate it if you could explain because this is important, and I need to fix it.
well, if someone offends my family or close friends, I got offended as well... I might not fight them, but I would avoid them... specially because Artion offended for so little... besides, I wouldn't allow so many expensive presents so soon... but that his way I guess... I respect that
Artyom apologized, and Finn somewhat sided with him since he knew that his friends and sister could make mistakes and be annoying as well.
I love this story, Mert is so nice and Artyom is just a walking red flag to me haha, I enjoyed the vn, can't wait for the next update
Artyom is my favorite cuz there's not much doberman love interests in fvn but I also like Mert. Wouldn't be surprised if Finn gets both
What happened to your other game???
I wasn't too satisfied with it. I'll probably reboot it later, but for now, my focus is on this game.