IDUNN.

Am I missing something cuz as of this build every choice either leads to the credits scene or the doomsday ....? Looking foward to the next build!!!

I ignored this for a while and the start was a bit slow and boring but holy fuck does it ramp up and get fun fast! It's like anime mixed with james bond and spanish melodramas

love this VN (DONT READ IF YOU DONT WANT SPOILERS)! i will say, if there is an ending were you can get Mert and Artyoum fall inlove with MC (but forreal) i would take it. Ppl critizise them alot but in my opinion, they did have trauma, and making them a whole different ppl.

So if MC decided to like, help them and start with the other characters (remember, also Rene & Holgar were backstabbers) a new life, cuz i feel like when they were young they were surpressed and lets say 'depraved' off their childhood or normal feelings. like Mert, he (i think-) became a killer just to protect the Artifact that MC has, but for a goodcause? (remember his father died and there was a war).

This is my good ending idea:

Lets say MC finds the bad guys, and convinced everyone (including, Mert,Arkyoum,Rene,Holgar, ecc) to defeat. as they defeat, they ALL together decide to make peace (please i love the 2 dogs, and i wanted a scene were they trully love MC)

spoilers !

My English is poor, so I translated this comment. I hope there won't be too much ambiguity.

Well, I think most of the story is well-written if you don't consider it part of FVN. First, don't project your character onto the protagonist; most people probably can't. Second, it's undeniable that the protagonist has almost no outstanding qualities, except for his naive and blindly optimistic attitude, which might stem from his lack of social experience. At first glance, I might find his actions repulsive, but his later act of risking his life to save the raccoon redeems this. Perhaps the protagonist is just an unconditionally optimistic and kind "saint," but his willingness to put himself in danger for a complete stranger is arguably a highlight of his character. His earlier greed and lack of vigilance towards two seemingly attractive men who inexplicably pursue him show that he's genuinely optimistic... even foolish, without considering why others like him. Regardless of the reasoning, I think it fits his character perfectly.

Then there's the storyline involving Red Dog and Black Dog, which was indeed unexpected, yet also somewhat logical. My reasons are as follows: First, they don't actually like the protagonist, but they are homosexual, and the many qualities they display to attract him during their pursuit of their goals do indeed draw each other in. Second, and this is my personal interpretation, the two dogs occupy similar positions in this mission, serving different factions. Through their daily interactions, perhaps out of shared misfortune, or perhaps out of mutual respect between powerful individuals, this creates a unique kind of attraction. Of course, I know that given their character development—Red Dog has been involved in politics, and Black Dog has been ravaged by the world—they shouldn't so easily trust or even fall in love with someone as dangerous and a rival as themselves. But what I want to express is that love isn't a rational thing. From a rational perspective, it certainly has many flaws, but rationality cannot give birth to love. Love is sometimes absurd, sudden, and unpredictable. In conclusion, I can still understand this part. Of course, you could say that this part is too abstract and makes readers uncomfortable, which is true. But I suggest not to project your own feelings onto the protagonist. I can't imagine how the protagonist could make someone fall in love with him if he didn't have the debt of saving someone's life. So I think the two dogs getting together can be understood as a dramatic reversal.

Let me talk about some plot points I personally liked. The first route I played was Mert's. From his character route, we know that Red Dog's family is broken. His father often said "good boy" when encouraging young Mert (I think it happened at least twice?). Later in the story, Mert says "good boy" again when he has sex with the protagonist, and during his confession, he even says he could be the protagonist's father. I don't know the original text or if it's just a coincidence, but my interpretation is that although Mert doesn't love the protagonist, he reflects his inner emotions while playing that role. It might stem from his attachment to his father, so he uses his own father-son relationship to compensate for the lack of a father-son relationship, thus making up for his childhood regrets (something like that? Anyway, that's my personal understanding), which echoes his character design. There are also small details like the hair tips of Mert's father turning white in his character art after young Mert grows up, but I won't list them all. (Actually, I've forgotten most of them after a few days, and maybe no one will read them anyway.) In short, these small details really touched me. I think it's very important that the characters' actions are connected to their life background stories.

As for the political issue, I actually think it's alright. I don't think the problem is writing about politics; the problem is writing it poorly. I'm not sensitive to the subject matter. As long as it's well-written and logically coherent, it doesn't matter how you write it.

In conclusion, if you don't read it as a romance novel, it's actually quite unusual, with most of the storylines being quite good. I personally think Idunn's storytelling is strong; the main plot is clear, the supporting characters are well-developed and have attractive character illustrations, and the plot developments are unexpected. For example, the undercover dog and cobra that the protagonist encounters on the island only appear for a few minutes before dying absurdly, yet the author still drew illustrations for them. This development is somewhat abrupt, but not bad. However, it's a pity that I originally thought there would be a depiction of Red Dog in the political arena, which I was very interested in, but it was only briefly mentioned as background information.

Of course, like the protagonist making the villain cry; the protagonist's character development is weak in the early stages; and throughout the ending, he seems to feel hypocritical about the two dogs' actions, I thought he had finally made up his mind to leave, but after the dogs' words of comfort, he has the option to change his mind again (I thought he had grown up, but he's still the same). These logical flaws are undeniable. Aside from these idealized elements, the inexplicable sex scenes within the furry world, and the rushed ending that left many characters undeveloped, I still think it's an excellent and unconventional novel.

The following section will not contain spoilers; it is my reason for recommending the novel.

I believe a good novel isn't defined by its themes, subject matter, or how unconventional it is; as long as it touches you, it's a good work. Among most Master Love games, I'm still happy to play one that aims for serious storytelling, incorporates mini-games, boasts rich character art, and features an unconventional theme. Regardless of the outcome, at least the author attempted to take this step, venturing into areas that may never have been explored before, so I think this courage and dedication are still commendable. In conclusion, I would give it an 8 out of 10, and based on my personal appreciation, I would add 1 point. If you're looking for a romance novel, this might not be suitable for immersing yourself in the plot; but if you need an unconventional novel to pass the time, why not give it a try? I wrote this late last night, so the logic might be a bit lacking. I tried to use relatively mild language in my review, hoping it won't be too offensive.

Please forgive my rudeness, even though my comments contain criticism. I hope you can create even better works in the future.

I cannot get over how entertaining this VN is, it's at the crossroads between romance, comedy, and also a fair bit of drama. The writing has a very "take it and go" feel to it with the way it so naturally introduces new characters and situations, it's very direct and flowing, for new readers it may take a little bit to getting warmed up to it but once it clicks the ride does not relent. Never a dull moment with IDUNN. Looking forward to the true ending!

My husband Berno WILL have his vindication..

I am truly and sincerely grateful for your creation. It is an honor to have the chance to experience the FVN you made,meeting you through your work feels like a rare kind of fortune, and I cherish that deeply.

Screw saving the world and fixing other people's problem, I need to adopted that Raccoon boy and make sure he is happy T~T

Never cried to a vn before and my god it broke me

Thank you very much for your update. Since I communicate through translation, there might be some expression issues. Please allow me to apologize to you. 

After the shock at the end of version 0.7, I'm very glad to see Finn grow significantly in version 0.8. At the same time, seeing the memories of the two characters has been of great help to me in understanding them. However, I'm a bit confused about some of Artyom's descriptions. On the one hand, he behaves like a child who can't get over that memory. On the other hand, his feelings towards Mert in version 0.7 and this ending make it hard for me to view the character Artyom positively. He's a bit disconnected, which makes me worry and look forward to his narrative in the later updates. However, I really like the plot where he recalls his first love. His first love was truly beautiful, but it also made me feel very sad.

 So if I were to choose my favorite ending in this version, I might pick Mert. His past and mentality make me want to comfort him a little. He's too tired. Besides, the ending between him and Finn gives me a sweeter feeling.

 Finally, please allow me to express my gratitude to you once again. Your artworks are truly wonderful, and the characters that appeared in the memories, Artyom's first love, are really beautiful.

Artyom backstory genuinely made me cry, and why is it always the wolves with depression and/or parental issues ?!! Also that kid makes me want to adopt him I’m sour that there’s not an ending where we can! >=[ Lastly but not least this was overall a good addition to the story I just wished Finn had a more reliable alliances like some character appeared only once and then never heard from them again. But this VN has a lot potential not one of my personal favorites but still a solid one. I hope things turn better for you, and I have great hopes the main ending will be sensational. XOXOXOX

I really loved everything, although I'm wondering about CG 40 and 43 that I still need to unlock in the update. I'm wondering what I have to do to unlock them.

hey I was wondering it's been a while since I've read have you added a split yet meaning away from polyamorous and you almost make me wish I could get my adult ish children's book out but of course it's hard for me since I live I won't go into that but yeah you really make me wish I could get that done

When you ask a friend to lend you some money and he replies : 

Spoilers :

I really liked the plot twist.

Let's be honest, the fact that Mert and Artyom fall for Finn in one look when he sees himself as a ball and chain with no self-confidence was pretty miraculous. It was just too good to be true.

Yet I honestly thought they were being sincere, that the script was just purely about sex and that we shouldn't question it.

So yeah, really liked that twist. It gives a much more complex side to the two dogs. I'd be curious to know how they knew Finn was the possessor of the artefact before Finn even realised.

Obviously, their betrayal hurts but strangely, I feel even more hurt by Apple. Unlike the other two, Apple is sincere in the desire he shared with Finn. I've just realised that it was he who prevented Maria from explaining to us that Mert and Arytom were playing a role.

Apple considers Finn to be the chosen one and doesn't bother to give him the slightest warning. OK, Apple needed them for the sake of his oh-so-important mission, but I think that's a pretty big betrayal on his part. He could have just told him not to get too attached to them so quickly.

Still, from Finn's point of view, I clearly prefer him to the other two. At least he's not a total hypocrite and his intentions seem more laudable than those of the two dogs.

In brief, I won't forget the magical moment spent on the zip line with Khaled. A body like that didn't deserve such a tragic end! What sadness! His spirit seemed to be able to be repaired, too!

Also, probably an unpopular opinion but I love Riley. After all, if there's one person you can trust after this update, it's her. She's brilliant!

I have a question about Arytom's ethics. He says he only kills people who disturb the law and order. Yet it was he who asked Holger to look after the lifeguard who hadn't asked for anything. So is the lifeguard dead or just knocked out?

I'm also a bit curious to know whether Hunter is really dead or not.

In any case, it's pretty daring to have a good proportion of the guys in the game be either assholes or psychopaths in a gay game.

Very curious how Finn will act now that he knows the truth. Sounds promising.

loved that last update, I kinda do wish there was a Rottweiler brothers route, they were hot.

I got traumatized from the start because of the dream finn had😭 the moment the tiger species and also the ring that makes me remember my dream I am really crying TwT

Please sir i want some more...

I wish there was a way to get closer to Albert and the dog family they are all so sexy

希望王子狗真心对主角的，不然真的太惨了

Why do I feel like the real Romance Routes are not them? Because if this theory is true, I wouldn't have it any other way, this is very novel and fresh concept to do hahahaha

Bruhhh hahahahahaha

This was genuinely so painful to watch, I kept asking why this is so well made and yet............so upsetting and eye-roll to read

UNTIL the reveal hahahaha then I thought "OH THAT'S WHY IT'S SO UNBEARABLE 😂😂😂" Then everything clicked in place hahahahaha

This VN is the definition of "Curiosity killed the cat, but satisfaction brought it back"

8/10 would definitely wait for the rest of the update

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