Mert and Artyom are both super hot!! Nice muscular bodies, nice nipples, nice faces, maybe the bulge a bit too much on the big side, but I guess it fits their size. Sure, Finn's sister is quite annoying but I bet she have her reasons. Can't wait for the next update, keep up the good work.
Now excuse me, I go grate my face on those big boy's abs :D
When will the update be ready?! Just kidding, kinda... I really like what there is so far and I was kinda bummed when it ended. Good Cliffhanger tho. As far as criticisms go: Riley, right now, is way too annoying and overbearing. And all 3 of the girls seem to be taking advantage of Finn. The games are troublesome for me to play due to arm spasms, which is a "me" thing, I know. I just hope no romance points are attached to them. Other than that, keep doing what you are doing. I enjoyed the game a lot.
Riley being annoying is intentional, and we’ll learn more about it later.
The mini-games are just for fun and entertainment, and none of them require winning to earn points. Even for the shooting game, I’ve lowered the minimum score requirement so that everyone has a chance to win. So, no need to worry about the mini-games! :)
The next update will be out next week or the week after. I hope you’re looking forward to it!
I played through everything that's in the game, everything is so good so far! Excited to see more! The only complaint I have is the tennis mini game, is that part necessary to geting romance points? Cause if so, holy hell was it difficult to score a win. The ball goes so fast that I had to swipe the screen as fast I could, and hope I scored. I wasn't sure if I should mention it cause it could've been not important at all, and just me rambling. I'm sorry if I'm seeming overly negative, it's like literally the one thing I disliked in this hopefully promising project. The characters seem interesting and the 2(3?) love interests seem really interesting, and would love to see more!!! Really liked Zuri and Sumin, they were really cute! While with Riley, I'm hoping her character gets fleshed out more, cause she just comes off as an overly controling bitch. I do like how she worries for Finn a lot! Really loved and can't wait to see more! Sorry that a good portion was for a part of the game that wasn't necessarily to get points!
No, don’t worry at all! I’m completely ready for any criticism.
As for that part you mentioned, I’ve already thought about it. That’s why you don’t necessarily have to win, just choosing the character you want is enough. Even if you do nothing and lose, it’s totally fine!
I'll be honest, Mert is my favorite so far, thought it was cute that he refers to Finn as (what I think?) beautiful in his mother tongue.
Artyom seems kinda interesting so far, still early to tell if I really like him so far.
And Horgor(shark man if I butchered his name) kinda confuses me, cause I can't tell if he's suppose to be a love interest or not. He's In some choices with the other two love interests, but not the others, and the fact he isn't on the page so it's throwing me off. I will admit, I'm oblivious some, so he might clearly be one or not, and I'm just dumb.
And I do like how it ended, cause I was kinda concerned if the girls caught feelings, only to find out that all three are pursuing Finn instead. Excited for more! And sorry for gushing at this point. Lol
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I'm curious if Holger will be a choice in the future? (Even if ntr)
Mert and Artyom are both super hot!!
Nice muscular bodies, nice nipples, nice faces, maybe the bulge a bit too much on the big side, but I guess it fits their size.
Sure, Finn's sister is quite annoying but I bet she have her reasons.
Can't wait for the next update, keep up the good work.
Now excuse me, I go grate my face on those big boy's abs :D
Wonderful presentation, mini games, mysterious plot, and sexy lifeguards. Very strong start, super excited for next update ✨️
When is the next update coming out?
I plan to release it within 7 days. You won’t have to wait long!
Oh nice! A slice of life VN. I'll wait patiently for more. Thanks =)
I'm dying to know what happens next!
Mert has been lovely so far, but... I don't know about Artyom, I don't know if he has a crush on Finn or if it's just Mert's competitive nature.
((Spoiler))
Do we get to see that tiger from Finn's dream again?
of course!
Oh my gosh, I'm so excited!
I can't wait to see him!
Aww, I demand a continuation! ♥️
Wow, it was so unexpectedly to hear that russian expression from Artyom, haha)) Already love him, so the vn too!
I hope I wrote them correctly; my Russian isn't very good :)
Fvn with mini game let's goo
I'm glad I gave this a shot. I'm in love with it. Mert, my love, I have a need for you. Looking forward to future updates
When will the update be ready?!
Just kidding, kinda... I really like what there is so far and I was kinda bummed when it ended. Good Cliffhanger tho.
As far as criticisms go: Riley, right now, is way too annoying and overbearing. And all 3 of the girls seem to be taking advantage of Finn. The games are troublesome for me to play due to arm spasms, which is a "me" thing, I know. I just hope no romance points are attached to them.
Other than that, keep doing what you are doing. I enjoyed the game a lot.
Riley being annoying is intentional, and we’ll learn more about it later.
The mini-games are just for fun and entertainment, and none of them require winning to earn points. Even for the shooting game, I’ve lowered the minimum score requirement so that everyone has a chance to win. So, no need to worry about the mini-games! :)
The next update will be out next week or the week after. I hope you’re looking forward to it!
I was kidding about the update, but within 2 weeks? I take it! I am indeed looking forward to it
She and her brother will need to have a talk about the future and stuff. Can't deal scenes with her if she's going to annoying throughout the story
I played through everything that's in the game, everything is so good so far! Excited to see more! The only complaint I have is the tennis mini game, is that part necessary to geting romance points? Cause if so, holy hell was it difficult to score a win. The ball goes so fast that I had to swipe the screen as fast I could, and hope I scored. I wasn't sure if I should mention it cause it could've been not important at all, and just me rambling. I'm sorry if I'm seeming overly negative, it's like literally the one thing I disliked in this hopefully promising project. The characters seem interesting and the 2(3?) love interests seem really interesting, and would love to see more!!! Really liked Zuri and Sumin, they were really cute! While with Riley, I'm hoping her character gets fleshed out more, cause she just comes off as an overly controling bitch. I do like how she worries for Finn a lot! Really loved and can't wait to see more! Sorry that a good portion was for a part of the game that wasn't necessarily to get points!
No, don’t worry at all! I’m completely ready for any criticism.
As for that part you mentioned, I’ve already thought about it. That’s why you don’t necessarily have to win, just choosing the character you want is enough. Even if you do nothing and lose, it’s totally fine!
I'll be honest, Mert is my favorite so far, thought it was cute that he refers to Finn as (what I think?) beautiful in his mother tongue.
Artyom seems kinda interesting so far, still early to tell if I really like him so far.
And Horgor(shark man if I butchered his name) kinda confuses me, cause I can't tell if he's suppose to be a love interest or not. He's In some choices with the other two love interests, but not the others, and the fact he isn't on the page so it's throwing me off. I will admit, I'm oblivious some, so he might clearly be one or not, and I'm just dumb.
And I do like how it ended, cause I was kinda concerned if the girls caught feelings, only to find out that all three are pursuing Finn instead. Excited for more! And sorry for gushing at this point. Lol
Thank you for the compliments! I truly appreciate them.❤
Riley is annoying, Finn should stand up more
I very much agree. Finn should be able to go off on his own with them boyz
I gotta try this one :3
ohh new game :)
Wow nee VN i try this..🥰